Hooks

in room one  we are learning about  hooks. A hook is starting of your story. A hook is to get the reader interested of your writing. 

 

A hook could be an onomatopoeia.  onomatopoeia is  like saying pow or any exciting words sounds . why do hooks help'' hooks help the reader get interested  of reading your writing and i like it because it makes my writing better .''and  hooks could use is speech mark. 'Speech marks are when someone is talking.  The last hook you could use is a question. You ask when, who, where or what. It makes my writing look interesting. 

 

skipping

Flip, flip, flip went the skipping rope. Everyday we go skipping. Room One and I skip because we are training for cross country. 

z I get about 20 skips in 15 seconds altho that's maybe not a lot for you I tried to skip a lot of skips.  In 30 seconds I can get 40 skips and in 45 seconds I can get 60 skips maybe more. 

when we  go skipping and we have a buddy and my buddy tells me how much skipping I do. 

and i count  how much my buddy dose.

This helps keep track of when to stop and i Like skipping cause it helps me get fit. it.Helps me get faster sometimes’’, and it is fun sometimes .ouch the  skipping   rope really hurts when it hits my foot ouch . I got my shoes so I don't hurt my feet and I am faster at skipping. I am proud of myself. I'm getting better at  skipping!.